Thursday, November 29, 2018

Sikharpur days part 1





A long time ago, there was a boy named Dhanush. He lived in grassland plains of ancient country of Lathimi. His village Sikharpur, was present at the far north region of the country. It was a beautiful village surrounded by the mountains and even snow fell on their village path during winters. It was a pastoral land with basic occupation of most villages as farmers or cow herders.

The east side of the village had a big river which was fed with water from the melting snow of the mountains that fall from the streams. The streams form glorious waterfalls on the rocky walls and happened to be a favorite family outing place for the villagers. Dhanush loved to trek those treacherous mountains with skidding path lined with moss because of the wetness of the trail from falling water. It was a daily routine  in his quest to uncover the hidden treasures of the mountain or the daily necessities like food or consumables. He was accompanied by his friends named Sambhu, Lochan and Lata.

They had been warned of the dangers of the mountain hidden from the naked eyes. Those were Bears, Leopards, Snakes, poisonous insects or fruits. They had learned it from their parents, mother or father from when they were young and visited those places under their protection. The elderly shared their experiences, wisdom, giving warnings about the dangers lurking in those mountain but couldn't stop them from going, as it's a necessity.

Dhanush was a strong lad, with well developed muscles, long arms and legs, and an active body which he used like a spring while climbing the trees or jumping off a hurdle. He had large black eyes just like mother, with long and wavy black hair contrary to his friends who have dry, unruly and unkempt hairs. His mother made it sure that he took proper bath and attend his daily chores with discipline, a habit being instilled in her from her life from living in her hometown. His father was a tall muscular man, with large mustache, for which he took a great pride. His primary profession being a farmer, is to attend the fields but he was also the sought after person to take the farm yield to sell outside village or to the town.


So, Dhanush along with  his friends Sambhu, Lochan, and Lata proceeded for their routine adventure. They had taken flaked rice, pickles and some fruits with them for snacks while planning to have some lunch from their collections in the forest.
Sambhu, a short and plump boy of his age, was very energetic and always on front. Lochan, a thin guy wearing dirty shirt and dhoti with tired look, followed Sambhu. Lata, a cute girl with long silky hair, always smiling while showing absence of one of her tooth, accompanied Dhanush as they follow others.

Dhanush was most experienced, and always remain behind looking around for any sound or feel of danger. He would warn the rest and everyone would climb to the tree. They would then survey the surrounding and make sure that no dangerous wild animal is at the vicinity. It was in their instincts as the ones who have lived their whole life there and they know everything about it. They had an encounter with bear, but it was a momentary chance meeting lasting for minutes. Even though it didn't count as an adventure, they still proudly proclaimed to have fought off the mighty Bear.

It was one such expedition, where they went to the forest near the mountains. The goal was to collect the seasonal herbs, ground potatoes, berries and fruits, and fish if possible. They went along the muddy trail since it rained a day before. With high on spirit they walked towards the dense forest. 
The trees were silent with lack of rustling, which unnerved Dhanush.The tracks were straight, with an feeling of discomfort. It could have been because of humid surrounding, but something made Dhanush to be on guard as they climbed the mountain, far from their village.

---- What happened next?------

Thursday, November 22, 2018

A new story




I love to read story books since childhood and even today, I find it very much relaxing and enjoyable to be able to read or watch different stories, be it novels, movies, TV series. Being an ardent fan of books like Panchatantra, Jataka tells, Sherlock Holmes and writers like Enid Blyton and Ruskin Bond since childhood, I too tried my hand in story telling.

It was an amateurish attempt of self gratification, and I succeeded in writing a few of them. As per critics ( my mom and sister), it was good but not great. Somehow, I couldn't make it more interesting and I also didn't have much patience create longer stories with deeper plot. Be it character development, instilling of emotions, making them more lively....I knew where I lacked but probably didn't have the will to rectify the same.

Its just like cooking, I am a foodie but don't know how to cook. It requires patience and hard work to develop the required skills to create culinary masterpieces. Be it any field, hard work is the key. And here I am, lazily lying on the bed, holding novel or viewing my laptop. 

But then, I also wanted to write a story too. To start with, some short stories, followed by light novels, and then bigger novels. The path is prepared, planning is done, only to take the first step!
So friends, today I wanted to make this commitment, more like a new year resolution, to write a story and hope that its interesting enough for the viewers!! :)


A new story,
with great plot,
the live of characters,
some  interesting lots!
Come again and read,
open ears and listen,
for I am writing new,
to have it reviewed !

And then, I will share,
just how much do I fare?
will it bring out the emotions,
drive the crowd into motions!
be it joy, be it pain,
tears of laughter or sadden,
or its about faraway adventure,
of mysteries and pleasures!!

Story it is,
I loved to listen,
a lot I had understood,
the encounters in childhood,
may be it's my time,
write in stanzas or rhymes,
with its twist and turns,
what magic would it churn ?  :)

Monday, November 19, 2018

My comfort zone




In the dreamland,
with it's colorful creations,
waving the magic wand,
refreshing my possessions....
Immersing myself within,
enjoying time alone,
that's what holed me up,
secured in my comfort zone!

 

I had been alone,
with my families,
even with friends,
as they... don't even understand;

The splendor of books,
the vastness of knowledge,
and the continued drive,
occupying my days.

Or be it my laptop,
connected to the internet,
streaming live TV series, 
rewarding my daily wait.

Is it my inadequacies,
the introvert shyness...
lack of outings or hangouts,
or simply my laziness!
 
May be these circumstances,
pulled me to this world,
bringing out hidden emotions,
lost in the old perceptions.

Allure of the stories,
adventures of characters,
as if being transported,
while feeling the atmosphere!

Lying on my couch,
reclining on my cushions,
as I read, as I watch,
the unfolding of the stories!

and so goes my life,
away from the daily strife,
being lazy to the bone....
while enjoying my comfort zone!!



Thursday, November 15, 2018

Over the hilltop




Continuation of the moonlight adventure;

Over the hilltop,
resting near the tree,
bathed by the rays,
what a scenery I see?
surrounded by the mist,
and fragrance it carries, 
with those tiny luminosity,
like dancing of the faeries!


Ah! such a beautiful sight,
behold, my choice was right,
as I listened to my heart call,
to explore my midnight stroll.
The freshness of air,
this feeling so rare,
magic of the surroundings,
opens up my bindings!

A sparkle here, twinkle there,
silent activities of somewhere,
as the creatures of night, 
prepare for fight or flight!
startling me, alerting me,
to their individual being,
accepting, appreciating the presence,
this harmony...putting me in trance.

Brief moment of tranquility,
from my tedious reality,
having its own allure,
from the enchantment....it conjure!
And here I am,
walking in this dream,
in the created illusion ,
out of my imagination!

Wanted to rationalize,
but I was being wise,
and I stood there,
lone tree and me....
imbibing the ambience,
perceiving in my every sense,
with the stillness of night,
filled with glow of the moonlight! :)


 



 







Wednesday, November 14, 2018

In the moonlight



It's cold,
as my naked feet,
presses upon the frosty sheets,
spread over the grass.
A momentary thought,
as I look out,
over the foothill,
where stands...the lone tree.


The cool breeze,
passing through me,
blowing my hair aside,
giving me the chills.
I shuddered, glancing over....
towards the distant hill,
shining bright.....in the night,
from the reflections of moonlight.


As I look back, 
towards an empty veranda,
a craving comes like a tide,
to open the gates outside,
Passing the invisible curfew,
to sprint towards the hilltop,
like curiosity that came to fetch,
from the other side of hedge!

Its that foothill,
with pebbles and grass,
small shrubs and vegetation,
so ordinary in daylight....
Then why, it looks so gentle?
welcoming me in open arms,
so I ran...towards the hilltop,
in the stillness of the night,

Elated, spent as I reached,
sitting on the rock, I gazed,
the vast expanse of the field,
glowing on this moonlight.
The rustling of the leaves,
small whispering of the winds,
loosening, put me at ease,
as I lie tired, from my flight.

Was I asleep?
I opened my eyes,
looking around, same night,
only numbness of cold feet.
folding it inside,
surveying my surrounding,
saw a small fox bark,
scurrying up in the dark.

I had a smile,as I remark..
No playmates in his walk,
or it's being in hurry,
attend to his own worry.
But what about me,
why I am here,
is it my impulse,
without my usual fear ?

As I wondered,
let myself ponder,
some light started blinking,
to bring pause on my thinking!

Those flickering were enchanting,
that's catching my eyes,
as if some fairies speaking....
from the signals of fireflies.

PS: Just what's ahead of this midnight adventure ;)



Sunday, November 11, 2018

MBBS course in India, some suggestions



Hello friends, 
Just reminiscing my old days of MBBS studies in college. In India, courses were mostly theoretical and importance is given for, how much one can memorize the definitions, and bookish knowledge.  There is no flexibility in the studies and finally it takes away precious years of the student without imparting much skills needed. ( It depends on individual capacity to learn )

What it signifies is, student lose much of their youth in learning something, which they will never use in real life while treating a patient. It results in an early burnout of student and subsequent disillusion from the course itself. This is not good for both doctors or the patients. Happiness is essential for optimal working capacity.

So, regarding this, I do have some suggestions. Hope someone works in these regards;


1. Make FIRST YEAR course of Anatomy, Physiology and Biochemistry of one semester rather than a whole year. The studies be made optional i.e  Students will be given independence in attending the course without the risk of loss of attendance. ( 60% or more attendance is good ) 
Rather keep flexible timing for workshops, practicals, so that they can go in working hours and directly learn the knowledge and skills from the PG students and Teachers regarding the subject.

Attendance can be taken there too...and it will also instill a sense of professionalism and freedom in the students. 

2. Make SECOND YEAR course of 2 semester rather than 3 semester. In reality, second year course of Microbiology, Pathology, FMT, and Pharmacology take more than 3 semester, which is a wastage of time.
Other things are same as first point, flexibility and freedom. As, not all students need to memorise and use it in later life. Its also impossible to do so.

3. Make THIRD YEAR course of Ophthalmology, ENT and PSM, 1 semester. Reason is simple, its not needed by all. Just the basics can be learned and other things can be learned in practical classes or independent time.

4. Make FINAL YEAR course of Medicine, Surgery, Pediatric and O&G of 3 semesters. Final year have good 2 semester course but it doesn't impart the required skills effectively to all students equally. 
Thus an extra semester, where skills of First aid, Emergency care, Essential medicines, General medicine and diagnosis needed by the majority of patients like chronic diseases, pain, cold, fever and its differential diagnosis. 
Skills that are essential and required to know by all students who were passing out as MBBS doctors, and let them work as general practitioners.


One can do an exit exam from MBBS, which identifies their knowledge and aptitude towards a specific subject. It will directly help them join any post graduation courses or give additional weightage  in exams like NEET and DNB.


I would also like to suggest additional clubs like Sports and Arts. It would help bring some variety in monotonous studies in MBBS and also help them grow as a person. It would help them develop or pursue their hobbies too and also avoid burn outs.

So, the world is changing rapidly and we too need to change ourselves to keep with the pace of it. Freedom is all we seek, and our time is precious. Hope, this will decrease the 6 year course (including internships) into 4 years and give additional time to the students to enjoy there lives woo along with their profession.

Wednesday, November 7, 2018

Diwali,the festival of light



So friends, yesterday was fun while enjoying the festival of lights, Diwali or Deepavali. We light candles and diya (a cup shaped oil lamp). We burned small Crackers like; Anar, Fuljhadi, Chakri.
Although it was a small affairs with my parents and me, as most of my friends were busy in their life and relatives are far away.


I do remember old times when I was a kid or school going days. The crackers were cheap, and lots of friends to enjoy with. We had our sweets and remain outside till late night. But now, being separated, Diwali is not that fun anymore. Even the Supreme court damper of burning crackers and promotion of greener Diwali doesn't affect me anymore. 

Anyway, just a few lines, for the great festival Diwali.

Deepavali,
the festival of light,
with people coming together...
to brighten up the night.

The sharing of sweets,
also different dishes,
spread on the plates,
we eat, we enjoy...
the feeling of togetherness.

It had a history,
welcoming of lord Rama,.
but for us, its different,
from our childhood times.

So, friends...
burn lamp and candles,
fire some crackers,
distribute some sweets.

Wish you and your family,
a very happy and joyous Diwali. :)

Friday, November 2, 2018

Sleepy

Sleepy,
tired,
just closing my eyes,
head falling,
arms supporting,
as I am drifting down.

The days are cold,
wearing my wool,
I sit on my chair...
do some tasks,
or mere waiting,
of my daily works...

I get so bored,
or being slowed,
as day passing by..
letting my mind go,
in a creative flow,
as I let myself lie.

Before I know it,
I couldn't stop it,
my eyes gets heavy,
and then, letting go,
surrendering to nature will,
I fall.....asleep.


PS: Just random scrambling!!😴😴