Ah! the rains,
the dreams, the pains,
the wish to be fulfilled,
the wait but in vain.
Ah! the rain,
the desire the strains,
the anger of being concealed,
the struggle of being sane.
Ah! the rains,
the beauty, the bane,
the tryst or being jovial,
searching happiness, where it lain.
Ah! the rains,
journey in the wains,
appreciation of being different,
making the heart being fain.
yes! the rains,
the dream, the pain,
the wait, the struggle,
happiness of the main!!
8 comments:
i love the rains....but dat line on the rain....i felt.....was a bit too repetitive......my opinion only though....
I love the rain!!
you do beautiful rhyming.
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Blasphemous Aesthete
i love rain but their is no rain in delhi........
i love the rain!! nice one.. keep blogging...
fine... seemed dat ur vocab xpanded n softened dan b4... liked it man... mite b the ending cud b bttr... neway kp penning!
n thanks a lot 4 dropping on my space, pls chk out my new post :-)
Oh the rains !! The feeling of letting yourself allow the little drops touch you freely .. Gives an ecstatic feeling , sometimes nostalgic , isn't it ?
Your poem is beautifully rhymed ..I loved it ! Its simply sweet ! :D
Nice poem and your blog has a very refreshing feel about it with such lovely colours and themes. Good job.
very nice.....
even i love rain.....
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